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good start

hey not bad! I like it keep it up!

As to constructive critizism I would say (1): when writing trance you have to build, start with just the bass line and the steady BUM BUM BUM beat. then and some harmonies and backgroud tracks, then bring in the melody. somtimes people will buld up and up then cut every thing, introduce the melody bu tislef, then bring everything back in, it creates a cool effect. My song Numa Numa Remix does this at certain points, its not trance but you'll see what I mean.

(2): I could raealy tell what the melody was until about 0:38 and by the point that song was over. I would suggest making the melody a little louder and more obvius than the other lines.

(3): while too much reverb can be detrimental, some is neccesary. Trance music is supposed to sound vast, epic, enormous. nothing gives you this effect better then echo and reverb. How mush is too much? that is for you to decide, my limits are when it starts to sound like your playing a piano and never letting off the damper and all the notes are running together and becoming a jumbled mess.

Anyways hope this helps, if youve got any questions feel free to message me :) - Cobra151

collab

you and Danman87 should do a collab of this, it would be fantastic

wow

wow dude, this is awesome. I have to agree with VulpixTheLonely on this one, its very God glorifying, absolutely awesome. The way you build, the orchestation, instrumentation, everything is great. keep it up:) - Cobra151

wow

I absolutely love this! your instrumentation is absolutely awesome, my favorite part is the very end when you add the second synth playing the the
wee,wee,wee part. It really helps the songs...oh I dont know... epicness? the beginning is very cool as well, its alomst like your song just pushes the original song out of the way and says "OUTA MY WAY! HERE PEOPLE LISTEN TO SOME REAL MUSIC!!" lol, love the audacity of that, anyways great song...again. :) - Cobra151

rrgh

ya know, I was gonna write a remix of this song, and then I heard yours and said "why write it? he did it just like I would have" :P I love who you bring in the melody that isn't ever found in the song, but fits well with the real meloy and bass line, glad to see im not the only one that does that :)

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/182066

This is a remix I wrote of another very popular dance song (you'll recognize it) I can hear similarities in the to when it comes to the style of writing (i.e. - parts where just the melody plays and then you build back up to the full orchestration) enjoy - Cobra151

5x2, 10/10

woohoo

woohoo yes. I kept listening to CDM 1 and thinking it wasn't long enough. this id great dude. it doesnt captivate me as much as some of your peices, but it really is very well done, keep up the good work. :)

P.S. - please do make another :P

very well done

love the mix, you master very well. gonna have to look into that program you use :P

Mydnight

Reminded me alot of Before Mydnight! Good Job! - Cobra151

F-777 responds:

Haha thanks so much man =D.

wow

you continue to amaze me with the stuff you can crank out. your innate ability to pick out a catchy meloedy, your orchestration, your dynamics, all of it is absolutely amazing. this peice has alot bigger braod feel to it, the kind of feeling techno should have. Halleluia, praise be to God! Keep it up!

F-777 responds:

Thanks so much =D!
(Im really really happy now =D)

lol

this should be background music for bubbletank game :P light and airy, good mix man :)

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